Friday, February 22, 2008

While ( 1 ) dream

It was just another day at the office for the tiger. Just that the office was different, and the tiger was very weak due to under nutrition diets. Tiger was feeling pain all over his body. He was weak. But still he tried a hand at the tiger badminton tournament held at the office. Well, no one believes he is a tiger there. He was treated as a kitten in the badminton court. Well he'll see them all.. all in due time.
hehehe...

After the major assault on him at the badminton court, he was feeling even weaker, vulnerable. He had not had food for the whole day. His stomach has been in the bypass mode for the past two days. He was all dehydrated. By the end of this "just another day at office" the tiger was too tired. He was having fever too. So he went back to his den early.

Still a tiger is a tiger. isn't it..? He cannot ask for care or ask for love. He still has to move on as if nothing is wrong with him. So he didn't care to tell any one in the house that he was ill.

He lied down. and just like that, even faster than yuvi comes to the creese and goes back, he was sleeping.

He was feeling uncomfortable, He felt that some thing is nearing him. something dark, gripping, it made him very dizzy, was making him unconscious. It was frightening and he felt it is going to take him with it. He shouted

amme........ amme....... don't let me go. amme..... I dont want to go..

He kept on shouting, he wanted to be heard, at least once before he is gone, forever....

Suddenly he felt a cold hand on his fore head. He tried to open his eyes.
amma !!!!
Papa was near by too...
He was telling,

monu.... where u going, you can go no where, k... , not when we are here, nothing will ever happen to you when we are here, nearby you, k..?
turning to mom, he said,
I'm going to sleep here, with him.
Mom said, she would too....

He was with his parents, papa on his right and amma on is left, he felt an unusual sense of security. He knew nothing could ever snatch him from their tight grip. He was asleep again. But....

when he checked the right side of his bed, with his left hand, he felt that no one was there. He got panicked...., he checked his left side, his mom also not there. What..? How...?

Suddenly he woke up and saw that his parents were sleeping in their bedroom.
They had never heard his shouting..... well, when have they heard..?
All a dream....., eh...?

It was a phone call that woke him up in the morning.
"Home Calling..."
He picked it.

It was a panicked voice at the other end. His mom.. yelling

what happened da.. what happened ...?

Nothing amme..nothing, just had a bad dream yesterday.. but, how did, how did you know..?

Dad had snatched the fone..

monu... nothing will ever happen to you , k... we are here.. just pray before you sleep,..

amma snatched it back...

Monu, It has been one year now, since you went to US... When you coming home...?

18 comments:

Anusha Iyer said...

Hope all this is not coming from our yesterday's discussion..

jishnukann said...

nah...
It was written earlier. Feb 22
:)

anu said...

hey u really are a writer ..

Unknown said...

gud log but it somehow does not match ur previous ones! neways r u missin home so much? i think you need 2 get a tigress to take care of u [;)]... thanx for not victimising me fust [;)]...

Unknown said...

blog for log*

Abhishek said...

Good article.... but didnt look like an "infinite dream" to me.... rather, while (1) dreams would have been clearer... thats just what i feel...

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Anonymous said...

Ok ...Whts all This Mr Kanna..????
, Ok Ma first comment as far as ur blogs are concerned....
Ok here we go ... This has so far been a lesson in fuzzy logic as far as am concerned , with hints f frustratin intertwined to say the least... U tryin tu be as Cryptic as possible ..?? ..U sure seem tu have gotten the hang f things .... finally !:P
Malayalathil Pulli alle englishlee tiger .. Thaan Aaruva enna Thante vichram ...!!!?? :D

jishnukann said...

"Malayalathil Puli alle englishlee tiger"

Allallo...

Malayalathile kaduva aanu Englishile Tiger

pallavi said...

gud one but didnt really get the relevance of title...

jishnukann said...

While (1) dream :
: could have been coz "all this happened in one of my dreams"

: could be coz, it was an iterative dream, and seemed was never going to end

: could be like " while one guy dreamt" what all happened

jishnukann said...

I just wanted to convey the strange feelings,

of the unusual sense of security when you feel u r near the people who care for you,

of the immense fear when u find out that the people whom u thought cared never really did, and u r left alone in this world

of the reassurance that u get when u find out that there are indeed people in this world who cares for you, might be in another corner of the world

But dreams got to be fuzzy I guess

pallavi said...

ohh..i missed out the "while" statement...u c i hv become a pure non techie now..!!!

Sree said...

"He had not had food for the whole day. His stomach has been in the bypass mode for the past two days.."

That was a good one!!really liked it:)

neskay said...

good work. keep it up...
as usual it turned out betr in ur screenplay than in ur script.. well subtilities i guess...
ur comment on wt u wanted to convey is beautiful... if only u could incorporate it in ur blog for th lesser mortals among us ... :)

Nidhi Jaiswal said...

"He knew nothing could ever snatch him from their tight grip".. Hw true.. yet hw false

Anonymous said...

Non-significant waste of time. This shows you are wasting your life. Wake up, do something useful .
Your work-life looks pretty improvable dude

mispassionate said...

U gt dis published,wud lov 2 buy ur book.
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